Tired but excited
After walking and walking
Never stopping
Just moving and moving
Tapping with changes
Jumping into opportunities
Running after love
Tiptoeing into the unknown
The journey isn’t over
A story is being written
Moment after moment
Step by step
While walking and walking
© 2010 Gabriela Abalo
This post is a submission to Magpie Tales #16, writing on a theme of the above illustrated shoes.
18 comments:
greetings, gabi - i've sat for some time now just reading and re-reading some of your beautiful posts - all very moving - thank you so much for coming by my travel journal blog - did you see my others? please feel free to check them out as i think you will appreciate them, also - as for yours, i am only too happy to follow along your journey here - namaste' - jenean
Yes! One step and then another!
The trick is to embrace change, don't you think?
This is really good! The middle is my favorite part, but it is all important.
Namaste Jenean, thank you for stopping by and leaving such encouraging comment. I really enjoyed going through your blog, so I’ll make sure to check the others.
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Tumblewords: thanks for stopping by. That is the way to go, one step at a time.
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Willow: Totally agree with you, change is the bread and butter of life!! That’s why we shall keep walking and walking.
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Mary Anne: what matters is the way we travel and not where we are heading to. I like traveling mischievously! ;-) Thanks for stopping by.
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Yes, keep moving..can't hit a moving target..very good!
Sometimes I feel like this, like I'm never stopping, always moving, one step and then another--one long continuous journey. But I love the positive feel of this piece.
And thank you for stopping by my blog! I look forward to getting to know you.
VERY COOL TALE!
HAPPY TUESDAY!
Now this my friend reminds me of friend LimesNow walking and walking always in motion. I love your poetry.
Lyn: like that: can’t hit a moving target!
Thanks for stopping by.
Carolina: each individual’s journey is expected to be fun, we are the stubborn ones that make it complicated.
I really like your blog, so you will see me there every now and then.
Thanks for stopping by.
Jingle: Happy day to you too and thanks for stopping by.
Tag: thank you my dear friend. As you know that is the way I go… moving and moving – an eternal traveler - searching, giving and receiving.
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A life's journey in the shoes. Cool poem!
Linda: each pair of shoes has a great tale to tell ;-)
Thanks for stopping by
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Yes each peir does have a tale to tell. If we can learn to walk for awhile in the other person's shoes imagine the tales we could tell. Another beautiful piece of poetry.
and what strong legs and tired feet from it all...
Love the lines:
"Jumping into opportunities
Running after love
Tiptoeing into the unknown"
Tag: the world will be a much better place is we would walk for a while in other people’s shoes. Less criticisms, expectations, fights, misunderstandings, etc. Differences will be embraced and not condemned
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Kay: welcome to the blog! I wrote the lines thinking like a child… mischievous thoughts but great approach… that is they way I’m trying to live my life.
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Gabi
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