Hear well what I have to say
Today is the day
That I choose to go away
I’m gonna play
So take me on your shay
To the city of Bombay
Don’t be dismay
Don’t start to pray
Don’t try to run away
Don’t refuse to obey
Just make my day
And be my date today
© Gabriela Abalo
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12 comments:
excellent date invitation ~ have a wild time!
I have nothing to say
and I'm not Jose.
why, I'd love too! thank you! :)
That would fun!
Lets just go out and play!
Way to say! hey?
Loved it and I might want to borrow it when I can't get my husband to do something I want him to do!
I love the bounce of your words at play.
They carry me up, up, up, and away.
So glad to see you were carried away. With your 55 words today.
I'm compelled to be swept up to the moon today
a great 55
moonie smiles
seem you are going to need a bus for all of us but i am in...smiles. fun 55.
Ahhh coooll!! Oh, and by the way, I'm new to One Stop Poetry. My 55er is at http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com if you wanna come see.
sweet 55.
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