Friday, October 1, 2010

55 - Make my day

Hear well what I have to say
Today is the day
That I choose to go away
I’m gonna play
So take me on your shay
To the city of Bombay

Don’t be dismay
Don’t start to pray
Don’t try to run away
Don’t refuse to obey
Just make my day
And be my date today

© Gabriela Abalo

Tell a story in 55 words. Give it a try or just read more, go see g-man.


Everyday Goddess said...

excellent date invitation ~ have a wild time!

Eric Alder said...

I have nothing to say
and I'm not Jose.

Kay said...

why, I'd love too! thank you! :)

Luis Gomez said...

That would fun!
Lets just go out and play!

Stafford Ray said...

Way to say! hey?

Kristen Haskell said...

Loved it and I might want to borrow it when I can't get my husband to do something I want him to do!

PattiKen said...

I love the bounce of your words at play.

They carry me up, up, up, and away.

Monkey Man said...

So glad to see you were carried away. With your 55 words today.

moondustwriter said...

I'm compelled to be swept up to the moon today

a great 55

moonie smiles

Brian Miller said...

seem you are going to need a bus for all of us but i am in...smiles. fun 55.

Shigune Matsui said...

Ahhh coooll!! Oh, and by the way, I'm new to One Stop Poetry. My 55er is at if you wanna come see.

Jingle said...

sweet 55.