Je pence
Out of commonsense
To built a fence
For my defense
Don’t be tense
I know I’m intense
But please don’t take offense
Based on false pretense
Please, hold the suspense
And all your incense
Until your sense
Understands my self-defense
My abhorrence
And abstinence
Aren’t a coincidence
I’m lacking the confidence
That will make the difference
My innocence
And inexperience
Were busted by your indifference
You insulted my intelligence
With your insolence
My intransigence
Is your penitence
Patience and persistence
Will prove your prudence
Silence is my preference
To answer your impertinence
So you see, why my fence is commonsense!
© Gabriela Abalo
This post is a contribution to Theme Thursday and Jingle Poetry poetry-potluck
18 comments:
wow,
what a beautiful piece.
loved the perfect rhymes...
playful spirits...
well done!
This was fun to read because of the rhythm and the phonetics. And I loved the last stanza - commonsense is way under-utilized :)
your participation tickles me..
love your kindness, open mind, and encouraging attitude..
your piece is perfect for our poetry potluck!
Happy monday!
have fun!
ha. nice rhyme...you carried that well...and it rains like bullets...this one would be a fun one to read aloud...nice.
Love it! :)
So sensible!
Wonderful! It makes so much sense, your fence (very well designed, too)!
Loved loved the perfect rhymes and thanks so much for linking with Potluck xx
Wtty effervescence!
Nicely done mono-rhyme!
Amazing job of rythmn and rhyme.
That must have been a challenge to find so many -ence words!
Victoria
Silence is my preference... that is my preference too. Liked it so much Gabi.
Thanks for sharing..
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Om Namah Shivaya
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welcome to Rally week 30,
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Happy Thursday!
Brilliant poem! Very in tune and true. Your blog is beautiful. Keep shining. :)
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the perfect poet award for you...
you can wait until two weeks later to accept...or accept before Rally week 31, which is in about two weeks.
Very well done. It rhymes and makes sense. That's not easy to do for everyone.
Brilliant poem! Loved the rhymes! Excellent job!
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